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Feedback Commisions (for Literature)I know there's a lot of aspiring writers out there (I'm one of them) and we want a little help, some constructive critism to let us know we're on the right track. But sadly the Literature community doesn't get a lot of attention, and it can be hard to get this critism, and even harder when you need a Core membership to get proper critiques.Feedback Commisions (for Literature) by WayTooManyOCs
I personally love writing feedback and helping out other writers like this, I'm even studying to become an editor, so I'm now offering cheap point commisions for feedback/critiques.
Fiction, non-fiction and original story commissions will be 100points (1USD) per thousand words (max of 3 thousand words per commison), and will include a full deviantart critique (vision, originality, technique, impact, deviousness), and I will also check spelling, layout, continuity, and may even find tutorials to help you if I feel you need it.
Fanfiction commisions will be 200points (2USD) per thousand words (max of 3 thousand words per commision) and will get everyt
Anime Review 9: An irresponsible God in a jerseyI just finished the first season of Noragami, and I absoluted LOVED it! It’s a mix of Kamisama Hajimemashita and Soul Eater! ^^ There are people who can transform into weapons (like in Soul Eater) but instead of living people it’s dead human souls who transform into weapons. It’s also very similar to Kamisama because the main character has a dark past and shares a similar rival. It has both action and sentiment, which are my favorite types of mangas. I dislike it when it’s just about love, like in Shojos (an example would be Ore no Monogatari: My love story), or when it’s just about action, like in most Shonens, where the main character’s goal is to become the most powerful being of all times… For me those are dull, uninteresting stories, which is why I love it when it’s a mix of both Shonen and Shojo, and that’s exaclty what Kamisama and Noragami do!Anime Review 9: An irresponsible God in a jersey by Ashry42
Even though Kamisama
This is WarThis is WarThis is War by MissTsukii
The gates are open, they're flooding out
I'm a one man army, there's no doubt
These soldiers are of different shapes, sizes and color,
I use all my might, strength and power
to put up a fight.
They're strong, don't get me wrong,
This war will last very long!
I'm pushing, trying to get through,
So irritating, so confusing, so tiring! (phew!)
My brows are crossed and my mind is lost
and my body can't bare it all
my eyes go fuzzy and then i fall...
Now i'm buried underneath this rubble,
I can hear my mother scream,
"If you'd have kept your wardrobe clean,
You wouldn't have gone through all this trouble!"
Dew DropDew DropDew Drop by MissTsukii
Parted without any goodbyes…
falling from the highs
fresh and beautiful!
Just falling freely, with no rule….
All those eyes watching,
see a bright smile, and sing,
"wonderful, delightful, how free!"
The real truth can anyone see?
As it dropped off the leaf,
all eyes gone and solitaire engulfed it's belief
of someone to understand,
that there's a frown behind that smile
None stretched their hand, let it dissolve in the sand
the dew drop's worth just lasted a while…
nobody to understand the story
of the one that lost it's melody,
waiting to be freed from melancholy:
The song of the one, who's lonely…
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