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School, Tests, and All The RestI'm not smart enough for this.School, Tests, and All The Rest by VioletRogue
I have no answer for this question.
The more I search my brain,
The more I feel inadequate.
I cannot fathom the correct answer.
Didn't I study this for hours?
Why is your intellect based
On such trivial things?
Apparently, I am not as smart as I thought.
Why don't I know what to write?
This test is a nightmare.
Why can't I get this right?
The only thing about me I was proud of
Has now vanished
Because my textbook knowledge
Wasn't up to par.
Help !When I write stories, people have often told me that my grammar is a mess. So I was wondering if anyone could tell me how to use grammar, especially conjugation, properly? I have a small gap that I need to deal with.Help ! by Ashry42
I just need to brush up on my tenses; I already know how to write in English (obviously), I just don't know how to apply the right tenses in the right place. When I write a story, I don't put the right tenses. I don't know when to use "-ed" or when to use "had + -ed" etc. I will start the sentence in the preterit and never know when to add the plus-perfect, or stuff like that (I don't even know what the plus-perfect is, I just took a random name. XD)
So what I need help with is basically the tenses: when and how to apply them correctly.
PS: I've already read many grammar books and they have not helped me at all, because I already know the rules, I just don't know how to apply them.
Gone Too Soon Part 5Keagan's Point of View~Gone Too Soon Part 5 by VioletRogue
I gently touched Amelia's shoulder in an effort to wake her up without giving her a heart attack. She opened her eyes slightly, closed them quickly, and turned to stuff her face into her pillow, groaning loudly. "No..."
"Time to face the day, honey." I said, sitting on the edge of her bed and patting her back. "Up and at 'em."
She rolled over and pressed her hand into her cheek, smiling at me. "A simple 'good morning' would've sufficed."
I rolled my eyes. "Good morning."
She sat up and stretched, letting out a yawn. "Good morning to you too. How's life?"
I reached for her arm and stood, pulling her up with me. "Stop stalling. You're getting up now."
"Who let you in?" She asked, pulling away from my grasp and setting her hands on her hips.
This is WarThis is WarThis is War by Angel-Tsuki
The gates are open, they're flooding out
I'm a one man army, there's no doubt
These soldiers are of different shapes, sizes and color,
I use all my might, strength and power
to put up a fight.
They're strong, don't get me wrong,
This war will last very long!
I'm pushing, trying to get through,
So irritating, so confusing, so tiring! (phew!)
My brows are crossed and my mind is lost
and my body can't bare it all
my eyes go fuzzy and then i fall...
Now i'm buried underneath this rubble,
I can hear my mother scream,
"If you'd have kept your wardrobe clean,
You wouldn't have gone through all this trouble!"
Dew DropDew DropDew Drop by Angel-Tsuki
Parted without any goodbyes…
falling from the highs
fresh and beautiful!
Just falling freely, with no rule….
All those eyes watching,
see a bright smile, and sing,
"wonderful, delightful, how free!"
The real truth can anyone see?
As it dropped off the leaf,
all eyes gone and solitaire engulfed it's belief
of someone to understand,
that there's a frown behind that smile
None stretched their hand, let it dissolve in the sand
the dew drop's worth just lasted a while…
nobody to understand the story
of the one that lost it's melody,
waiting to be freed from melancholy:
The song of the one, who's lonely…
You're Just...You're Just... by Angel-Tsuki
My heart skips a beat, like a skipping stone,
It's a rush.
It's like moonlight. To fade away,
it takes a word that's longer than a while
sweet as the sound of a chime
like the words of a poem that rhyme.
like soft rose petals. I'm taking dips
in the ocean of your talk.
when you walk that walk.
freezes time, oh, I can write a book.
the only one I see now.
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